beat is decent.....drums is tight but supporting instruments suck but drums make it decent......first verse....flow is basic...an its rushed in spots......delivery its a tad lackluster u coulda put more feeling in it.......hook....it had been mixed better to be wetter it woulda been stronger but it was a good idea u jus didn't execute it properly...second verse.....flow woulda been better if u had put the right emotion in it...i t was singy in beginning but emotion was monotone...aww if he had put right emotion that verse woulda been nasty......third verse....flow was decent breathe control hurt it...couple lines u ran outta air an didn't drag out words enuff to make it hot.....addlibs was a tad too loud an u could used more.....a stop an go flow wit addlibs woulda really worked on this beat......but not bad...4th verse.........this dude's flow is real basic......an the delivery is blan if u gon come wit this simple flow u gotta make up for it in rhythms an delivery an dude aint make up for it.....track was a good idea...but yall jus lacked polish to really make this track what it coulda been but in time yall will grow this shows real promise...jus keep at it......1

__________________