ah'ight quality could be upped...vocals kinda low....an not as clear as could be.......delivery was unchanging...coulda used more emotion an a general change up woulda really helped u......flow was decent but repetitive..needed to change rhythm up here & there an drag sum words out..emphasize certain words to really get ya point across......presence was missing.....jus didn't have enuff feeling/conviction behind ya words....if u dun sound like u feeling what u saying why would the listener? ya get me......overall it coulda been better son......but u getting better an better wit every track...the key is to not get frustrated an continue to improve with patience an dedication u def gon be ah'ight son..........1

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