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Old 02-20-06, 11:48 PM   #2
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Oye...Tu Sabes..!!
 
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you skipped a line in your flow, so it got choppy...the part with knowledge, read it agai and you'll see. but this was good, i get those moments as well, when you wanna write a verse due to a song. good overall, nice vocab and some good rhyming. rtf homie in my OM tears of ink
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