your lyrics are def nice....but your voice seems toooooo proper for the aggressive voice your doing this song....im not too comfy with da chorus..its DECENT to da max.....well..sounds like there's someone else on the track??....or u just sound different..im confused...the second verse is alot better i enjoyed dat one a lil more than the first verse third and fourth were aight...how many people were on this song!?!...but um..overall well put together song had its flaws but it was aight

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