alright i'm listenin now....
you had way too much echo in your rap....you have good flow and a good pressense..you should up your emotion a lil but it was pretty good your problay the best femcee on here if you had better quality you'd be even better...cuz quality was kinda bad
lol what was up at the end? LOL "TOO SEE IF I CAN THIS ON THE CHARTS" lol what were u doing? LOL you were goin crazy
hahahah but the song part was good..and the beat was alright......overall this is a pretty good song...just quality killed it.... 8/10
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