wow actually pretty nice...i can hear this bein played on da radio..but take that as a compliment the girl singing is dope she gotta nice voice..your flow was nice delivery was killin this IN a good way tho..im feeling the lyrics as well tho..u did the beat justice...i like the chorus as well...i dont wanna play around i wanna lay you down lemme show u things u neva done girl just hop on in ..yeah very catch chorus feeling the end when ya both repeated the hop on in part that was a nice addition .. i appreciated the feedback and your song is great no B.S. good listen...Uppin for more Replies