id say before you sent it into the radio...line up your stacks at the beginning a lil bit better....take a lil reverb off....

and at the beginning when your flow...when your at the point when your like..."undressed and your ready"...when you drag em off past the snare drums...make it a lil more smooth...its may be the stacks...im not sure....but it seems like u rush those a lil bit....



good track though....presence and delivery and everything is nice....its a good song...def. could be heard on the radio...id say send it in

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