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Old 02-22-06, 08:33 AM   #24
Mike Macs
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Voted For: Defined

Defined-Some good punches, short, sweet and to the point
Poetics-Some lines felt stretched, felt like you made the verse to long cus it didn't really keep me intrested, had some basics like perspire retire etc...
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