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Old 02-22-06, 09:05 AM   #6
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Black Poet
 
Posts: 1,474
From: London
IP:

I know thats what I thought,... a few people liked this verse but a few
said that I forced the rhyming ????

Governed by law corruptions hard core
Civilisation’s soar AID’s left heart tore
The river of death’s shore left lock jaw
Don’t have malaria cure was deaths saw

Beyond the shack I dwell is a living hell
I express my dismay but ended up in cell
Don’t have jail the rebel forces would tell
Beyond the cobble paving dead flesh smell
No enriched soil all pure water went boil
World gave Aid to feed but need was toil

I dream of tranquilly to save my mentality
But in reality I can see no form of solidarity


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