The shit was crazy nice. I liked it alot, a lot of nice lines in this one. Everything was pretty nice in this, i didnt see any real problems wit it. My favorite bar was:

Weither I'm fly or raw, Its decisive and the rhymes is sick
and you check ya wrist watch and its sayin 'time to quit'

^^Thats crazy right there. Nice job man, keep it up. Please rtf on anything in my sig. Peace.