Today...... I have decided, to minus the time with
the dynomite, lets travel to where the fire ignited..
The dynomite's kissin the fire, wyfe beaters injected..
the wick's losin height, waitin for a finger to press it
short but sweet, well written, could've been touched up here and there, but whatever, you probly did it quick

....thought those were the best 4 lines, just happened to be the most important ones, good job man, keep up