This was ok just for a freestyle, but u might wanna make ur lines a lil bit longer. The flow on this was ok nothing special tho, ur vocab needs increasing also. U should add in more multies to make it flow better and some internal rhyming. But try some of those things and get at me and i'll give u more feed aight man. Please return the favor by giving me some feed on anything in my sig, doesnt matta which one. Peace.