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Old 02-23-06, 05:27 PM   #9
.Poetic.
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Originally Posted by Oz.
why you say that because it wasnt long ?

Inadequate voting dog your name is like some third grade shit


My name is a joke, and no it wasn't because it wasn't long. I usually don't write any of my pieces over 20 lines.

It was just shitty.

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Originally Posted by Oz.
Why?

Why is a word of questioning Obviously.
Thoughtfully a answer should be given
Slowly but not hastly to finish guessing
For the answer to the why question Last three lines had horrible flow and were just stupid.
Why, is a question were the answer is a reason
why should the leaves come and go becasue of season? You're just forcing a rhyme for reason, cause the season thing is stupid.
Like many I think the best season is spring
If for exception of poisin ivy and bee stings Nobody gives a fuck your favourtie season is Spring.
Why, why must people past?
which makes crying tears that always last
the thought of past is in the present
why must a king discriminate against the peasants? Only have decent part in your piece. Shitty flow.

The worlds most intelligent questions start with why Most questions do.
Why must we live just to die? We don't live to die. We live to live, if we lived to die we'd just kill ourselfs when we were born.
Why must why be a question? Because without it we wouldn't have intellegent ones. You said it yourself.
why,why,why is that even the question? You just repeated yourself dumbass.



It sucked, straight up.