Voted For: rexless

IP:


U ANOREXIATE……. THROWIN UP rhymes….. ur win margins very SLIM
U never follow the ELEMENTS so ima go ahead and BARIUM (bury him)
played 6/10
U neva CUMIN out HARD u soft nigga……… ERECTLESS
Leavin u to DINE-ON-SORES(dinosaur) w/o TEA that’s why REX-LESS
lol stupid ass word play first line is played
Not spittin at full potential but got the WIND(win) it’s a BREEZE b
RV say u koed that makes gods judging jobs easy
first line lol at trying to make up wordplay and second line seems all filler
U DEAD like REXLESS(reckless) DRIVING leave a L behind on the WHEEL(will)
Let your rhymes become SUICIDAL that’s the only way ull get a KILL
this was ok
Dawg u NEVER CONNECT so why PUNCH u know u BLIND and all
But I throw DOME shots so go aHEAD-ACHE like TYLONOL
ok kind of played

OVERALL I HATE YOUR STYLE NOT APPEALING AT ALL IN MY OPINION MAKING UP WORDPLAY SOME DOESNT EVEN MAKE SENSE LIKE THE WINd LINE WASNT FEELING IT TO BE HONEST OVERALL YOUR WHOLE VERSE SEEMED FORCED AND PREWRITTEN REALLY FLOW WAS OK I HAVE THE FACT THAT YOU HAVE TO CAPITOLIZE YOUR WORDPLAY THEY SHOULD BE ABLE TO GET IT STRUCTURE COULD EB IMPROVED IN SPOTS

Born a ledgend..if my rhymes hard to catch, go fetch them...
cuz your ass dont deserve the right to be a rectum..
YEA I DONT GET IT LOL
Heres a lesson..how my rap game slangs with percision..
cause when I-contact..i destroy M.C vision..
OK BORING
Most need to listen..my wordplay gives depiction...
N if u don't see pictures..than my rhymes considered fiction...
PRETTY COOL LINE
you only drop'in when slip'in in the weather...
u'll get hit with more punches than heavyweights put together... OK LINE NOTHIGN SPECIAL
Surrounded by weakless names that use dangerous magic...
My spontaneous tactics will leave you in graves or caskets...
SECOND LINE SOUNDS REALLY FAMILIAR NOT SURE
I’ll ingrave my name on ya face usin my blades and my hatchets...
I sit here training for practice inside this cage that I’m trapped in...
ARE YOU WRITING AN OPE MIC OR BATTELING IN THIS LINE?
Randomly spittin spades like Im gambit quickly ace’in this faggots...
The fact is m.c dna has vanished now Ima man with a aliens handprints...
OK LINE

OVERALL YOU HAD NO PERSONALS YOU COULD TELL IT WAS FREE'D STRUCTURE WAS OK COULD USE A LITTLE IMPROVEMENT BOTH HAVE MEH WEAK RHYMESCHEMES VERY BASI WORK ON PERSONALS IM VOTING FOR YOU BECAUSE UR VERSE DIDNT SEEM FORCEDE IT WAS MORE FLUENT

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