iight since you want constructive feed ill leave it...and btw sayin yur the best aint the best way to get attention on this site...your voice is much better rappin then it is talkin lmao...your flow and delivery needs wrok, make your verses fit the beats...use more emotion in your songs (im listenin to to my father)...add soem libs andshit to your verses they sound empty...and make your chorus's stand otu more from your verses, cuz i could barely tell it was a chorus...lyrics are pretty good....but yea elevate....this aint terrible but wasnt good...but yea youll elevate...

cood ya leave feed on my thread too
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222977