Listening...

I love this beat...

Hook...ehh...you could have sung it way better. Or maybe even flipped the structure because it's the exact same as the actual song, other than it's not sung.

Trakk Starr...Flow is good...falls off in a couple places. Delivery is quiet and not fitting the beat well...it was monotonous.Quality is muffled it sounds.

Hook again...

Snypa...quality was good...flow was choppy a bit, and it also fell off in a few places. Delivery was also lacking in your verse...decent.

Third verse is pretty much the same...

Overall...decent remix, but if you threw some more energy into this, it would have sounded better.

Just keep working at that stuff...

Keep it up.

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