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Old 02-26-06, 09:58 AM   #5
J.D
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listenin........

beats nice, im feelin it.........

1st cat-nice flow, good delivery, lyrics were good for this type of track....only thing i can say to improve on, is the complexity of ya lyrics but that doesnt matter that much, cuz this wasnt type of track to be comin wit real complex shit lol. yer nice verse

hook-yerr yerr not bad, quite catchy, "in our hoods we some S.T.A.R's" loll

2nd cat-nice grimey delivery lol, feelin it....good flow, im feelin ya emotion aswell....yer good verse.....could add some variation to ya style or sumthin (speedin ya flow up etc)..but good verse anywayz

yerr nice track yo. 8/10

ps. get at me for a collab sumtime
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