ok typing at I listne..did u make this beat? it sounds very fruity loopish....however you open decent..flow is pretty good.....delivery could be upped..lyrics was ok nothign speical.....oh ok..hook was pretty tight nice mix on it...UNF is def elevating..flow is pretty tight too...delivery needs more emotion..if ya emotion was on point that woulda been ill...lyrics here was also jus ok...I'm def feeling this hook....ok 3rd verse....comes in weak...did u reocrd this on a different day? unf's half really needed to be upped....snypa..ya half was decent but 1st verse u shined most...again good hook....this wasn't a bad track..an actually started to like beat more cuz hook really gave it life.....def keep up good work..........1


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