this the first time i heard u spit...voice is raw, i like it, the beat is iight, not really my type tho...you flow pretty good this beat tho, nice lyrics...good devlivery but i feel like there could be some mroe emotion on it...this sogn is decent, i would have to say the oly things i would change on this trakk would be the amount of emotion, and the shorus (not feelin the chrous, lol)...nice job tho homie

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