listening


beat.... reminds me of some Friday the 13th type ish...

1st verse: Never peeped you b4... but... for the first track... you show that you got the basics down... now you gotta master it... and the thing you doin wit your voice... i dont mean the effect on "YEA" ... i mean... that you sound like your spittin to hard..
and you gotta work on your content... keep spittin but... work on delivery... being smooth... you know... and feel what you sayin...




2nd verse: Some places you sounded like you were tryin to be 50...


3rd verse: Did i hear some Eminem Biting goin on here??? 20 below freezing... no reason... flavor wit no seasoining???

4thverse: Prolly best verse on here.... showed a lil more who you are as an artist... i didnt notice as much swagger jackin as in the first 3 minets of the track...


Greasy mayne......... Holla at a pimp...you got a ill Southern thing goin on...

summers... keep droppin and work on original lyrics...

feed used 2/27 "Mushu Da Pimp"

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'