*walks in* hmmmm

yeah the was pretty good... consistant flow... smooth multies... nothing really forced... Lyricallly on point... and a great structure through oiyt... I could really see this being spit, and was saying it in my head the entire way thorugh... I think the hook, & chorus are a bit long though... and won't fit an actual beat unless it's taylored to the song... Seeing as how the verses are both over 16 bars... and most hook slots on a beat are taylored to 4 - 8 bars...

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