beat ok used a lot lol Idk why but u remind me of nas a tiny little bit I would never download this because your emotion is so blaaaaaaah no emotion at all lyrics you told a story ok nothing great really a few corny lines in my opinion flow was pretty boring
2nd guy emotion is good a lot better than first guy flow isn’t boring like first guy lyrics were so so 1st guy again you have decent lyrics you just really need to up your emotion and your flow and take more time writing your lyrics you got a few dope lines than I hear a few wack ones outro should be upped on the volume a little production could be upped also
overall I I heard this song and was asked if I wanted to buy a cd id say hell no I think you guys need to go all out on the intro song

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