uh...yeah not a bad track ...you sound like a sissy...put some bass in your voice ...get more emotional...who is the other cat in this...who ever it is its better than your verse(but hey, at least you got balls enough to post up) ...you gotta get more emotional ,... get angry or something and attack the mic dog... but keep workin ... ...

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