I Chill in Asylums
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Not bad, but u should finish it. I like the dialogue u got going on, its not bad. But u should add some more multies into it, cuz i didnt see many in this. But it seems like a good story, the topic is something i havent read on this site yet, so good luck with it man, once u finish it i'll get at it again, please rtf on anything in my sig, thanks. Peace.
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