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Old 02-28-06, 10:13 PM   #12
Jay Rose
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what kinda feed you guys want....i like the song....the end.

1st verse. dude sounds good, might need to calm down a lil on the mic or maybe the db level is too high i cant tell.....but otherwise good lyics...may need a lil work on delivery, nothing major....
2nd verse. dudes on point, graphic i like it...very good flexing with the voice, was feeling ya highs an lows...just a good verse overall

the beat wasnt special, but it still had me noddin my head a bit, not a bad song at all one of the best ive checked out so far....8.25/10.....

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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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