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Old 03-01-06, 02:47 PM   #10
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Voted For: TaShay

*shudders after reading this battle* this was the worst thing I've forced myself to read here in quite some time... 1st off Buddy just because you're battling a girl does not mean just call her a slut and say you'll fuck her... it's old, it's played, and it never truly worked... your entire verse was bullshit A tipical "OH shit I'm battling a girl" .... *SMH* with that being said... Tashay if you're gonna rumble with the big boys you really need to step up ya game... if Buddy had a attacked you like you wee another guy... he'd a handed you your ass... but as is

Punches: Tashay
Personals: None from either of you
Creativity: Nothing
Complexity: Nothing
Wordplay: None and no attempts at it either
Multies: None... and Tashay 1st 2 lines don't rhyme @ all
Enjoyment: No nothing

Vote: Tashay

PS: and don't even bother getting upset and trying to battle me... I'll smash dat ass... just take the crit and improve
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