I Chill in Asylums
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IP:
this was good, for a freestlye. i saw some multies scattered in there which was good, but u should add more to make the flow better. the topic wasnt all that good since many people do it over and over. the vocab was good and the structure seemed fine. overall it was an average drop, but keep working at it. hit up one of my open mics doesnt matter which one. peace.
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