good track...funny intro...i like the hook....since this is feedback i gotta say all you need to work on is breathing a bit....i mean i suck at it, but you can hear you breathing sometimes...you get that away, n you have the potential to blow....good track
and apparently i was accused of dickriding you, cuz i said ya name in a track....know that is not the case, but you do got skill
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=223364 <-- me "dick riding"
vote kids....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead