ahhh. i dont care who you vote for cuz i know i killed him in ever aspect and you might just be holding a grudge cuz i decided that production was important, but damn man....can a man get a lil feedback...not one word explinations?
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Originally Posted by Fuck u up!
Voted For: Jay 286
Summer...
flowin koo.. on the beat.. simple n strait forward...
ideas are decent nothing special..
delivery is pretty koo..best part of your verse to me..
punches rolled off decent..
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286...
flowin on the beat koo.. gettin up n down into it koo..slipped on some parts...
ideas are koo.. good appraoch with some but ended wrong =/..
delivery...not for me but koo..helped ur punches
Punches.. came off koo cause of the way u shott'em off..
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ideas..tie
delivery..tie
punches..286
overall.. Jay 286.. dude's verse just added up t more in he end.. had a better punch set up which was more effective here which was really the difference..pZ!
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i mean that is feedback...so i can understand why you voted....not just cuz "oh yea for the sake of battling" so feedback please
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dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead