Thread: AITZ vs H.D.
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Old 03-03-06, 11:33 PM   #11
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Voted For: H.D.

H.D.:
“A”mbitious?? ya not malicious couldn't win with a miracle & 3 wishes
“I” know ya phony, I beat ya with a term of endearment, call you my homie (clown)
4/10 - Weak Opener, didnt rhyme could have hit harder.
“T”o tell the truth you wouldn’t be above my level straddling my roof
“Z”ip over to UrbanFlows and drop links just to show the proof
4/10 - First line was good, second sucked!
“Z”ipper-face I’m sonning you backwards and forwards, call me ya dad
“T” oo sad that in ya dreams you couldn’t rock me performing with Queen
5/10 - Didnt rhyme - alright punch.
“I” stay courageous, you stay fear like the cape, I’m taking ya booty like rape*
“A”ITZ spittin’ freestylin’ or written, I’m rippin’ this kitten, cringe whore (Cringer)
2/10 - Didnt rhyme, wasnt fealin' it!
15/40

You had a niice structure, and it was dope spellin' out his name, but you lacked hard hitten punches and you used no good personals. Flow was pretty tight though.



AITZ:
I’ll make you collapse like a building with c4 strapped to it
Walls like plastic, watch me melt with intensive heat you can’t handle my static
2/10 - Shitty Opener.
I Aim straight to hurt this light weight like a shotty against a tin can
Don’t need to reload with 1 shot I can take out your 4 men*
3/10 - Bad.
You give so many headaches your content isn’t necessary
It’s like the blind sighted 4 the first time being at a bird sanctuary**
4/10 - NO.
Tryin to hold that you cant put enough combat in to murk this enemy
Just fall back I kill using mics as a bat now H.D. needs I.V
5/10 - Was sick. Could have worded it better.
14/40

You had an ok flow, you used some ok personals, no really good punches or wordplay in your verse though.


OVERALL: This was a close battle, which is surprisin' becuz H.D. Should have flat out WHORED this cat. But he still gets the vote for the better flow, he used better punchlines as hell. Aimz nothin' really stood out in your verse, you need to up your rhymes and your punches and wordplay. No Hate.

Vote - H.D.
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