since no1 else will elave feed i guess i will...

...to much talkin in the intro, sounds gay, jsut let the beat play in the beginning...you got potential, improve your ridin skills, sum of your flow is off...i dont kow if you first or second tho...
2nd guy, flow is also off in sum spots, good voice...yall both need some more emotion...i like the beat tho...lyrics are decent
3rd dude, also needs to fix flow, these lyrics arent as good as the other two verses...elevate and then drop some other trakks after you improve your flow...youll get better wit time

could ya rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223420