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I don't lose
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IP:
i dunno man....i dont think this type of song is for you....you sound young, you need a more mature crunk voice to do the 'shake that ass' type song....but on the up side, lyrics aren't bad...hook is okay.....delivery is eh...its there, a lil too complicated for the beat....you gon need alot more energy for the song to hit....but its not bad...just keep workin on it
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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