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Old 03-05-06, 09:57 PM   #16
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Voted For: TaShay

TaShay:
hiz Nigga Talk Shyt, till hiz head Leak..//
the only way u spitt heat it with ya dick, Cuz u stay with Diseases..//
3/10 - Weak Opener.
Put ya 'DiCk in ya Hand' and see how much uz fucking yaself..//
Battling me u trying ta 'come hard' so u can play with yaself..//
2/10 - Stupid.
Your gonna need the Magic stick, cuz thatz the only way u can 'fuck Wit me'..//
I Swallow ya lyrics, guess that'll be ya first 'Deep Throat Defeat..//
5/10 - 2nd line was good, first didnt even rhyme with 2nd.
Ya life is a Done Deal, U've already Comitted SuiCide..//
Da CloCk Stopped Stop TiCking, ByTcH ur Lifez outta Time..//
2/10 - Weak Closer.
12/40

You had a pretty weak verse, you lacked strong punches and good wordplay, your vocab was also weak.



Buddy Boi:
Hello Tashay Da is names Buddy Boi so dont u 4get it
because after this battle gurl u gone let me hit it
3/10 - Weak Opener.
Ma dick gone be like a drug and have u addicted
i gone you fucked up ta whereas u cant fix it
2/10 - Weak.
cause u slut and ya cant help but drink da nut
i'll ya walk crooked and stupid cuz i fucd u n da but
2/10 - Lame.
Hav ya tellin ya boyfriend da marks on ya but is papa cuts
bitch u dirty i sendin u to da fuckin pound ya mut
2/10 - Stupid.
leave ya dere have you fiendin fo ma nut
time fo me ta me end and give u ya nut through a straw
2/10- Whack.
11/50

You had a very weak verse, your punches were shitty as hell, your personals were fake, you need to work on your rhymes.


OVERALL - I give my vote to Shay becuz she had the better rhymes and her punches where hitten harder. She also used a better flow. Buddy you used stupid ass punches becuz she was a girl, and they were whack as fuck! You need to use more creative shit and up your vocab.


Vote - TaShay
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