Voted For: Premanition

Premanition:
The chance of melo hurtin me is like a daylight burglary
Its minimal u learn from me with scriptures causin surgery
5/10 - Good Opener.
can’t compare me to you, no debate, god damn bitch elevate
you far from great, carmelo only poetical when he masterbate
5/10 - Good Punch.
five thousand posts, no life and still you learning the basics
this fake kid neva get the picture, so I grab a pen and trace it
7/10 - Niice.
face it you excavate in life, as a personality you not distinct
not good with words but ur record indicates ur hot with links
5/10 - Good Punch.
carmelo? Yeh but Anthony can reply when the orders tall
whereas you can’t ‘hit’ anything, you must have swollen balls *
3/10 - Weak Closer.
25/50

You used a good verse here, your punches where hitten hard good personals and wordplay. I liked your flow it was a overall tight battle verse.


Im Carmelo Yall:
prems the type to cause hype and immitate Vets Style.
Next he'll be ''knittin yarn'' for a better Text-style (textile)
2/10 - Weak Opener.
Not that your a biter, I'm sure deep down theres a Fighter..
But Your Mind must be like ''Dim Authors''..
..................................I think you need a Brighter writer.
6/10 - Good Wordplay.
Ignite your pen with a lighter, Shit call on the Brigade!!...
Or you could resort to plan B...
...........................And tell everyone you have aids
5/10 - Good Punch.
Atleast nobody gon fuck wit ya, hold your head up high
Cause if I was you & I started rhymin
.........................................even i'd be askin...WHY?
4/10 - OK Closer.
17/40

You had a pretty good verse, you used some decent punches and good wordplay, it flowed good as well.


OVERALL - This was a good battle right here. But Prem gets the vote becuz he used funnier punches and good wordplay, his also flowed better. His vocab was better and it rhymed niice. Carmelo you had a good verse as well, your vocab just wasnt as good, and you didnt use as many punches.


Vote - Prem

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