Honestly......you do have some potential. You have problems with keeping your flow. You seem to throw too many words in some of your lines every once in a while. And on the real......change your name. How can we take someone seriously who's got some numbers after their name. It's like you are the 286th person to use that name or some shit. Come up with an original name. You also need some lyrical content. Your punches are pretty played. You seem to have like 32432qo34195721741 gay punches. If he's not really gay, then it just sounds like you don't have anything else to say.....and it gets repetitious.
So step your game up and drop a couple more lyrically sound tracks, then hit us back
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