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Old 03-06-06, 09:57 AM   #7
Daubs
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Beats ok, flows decent on poin, voice is dope...decent lyrics.

I think the hook is ill, dope mixin on it.

2nd verse, flow again is top


Sick track, only thing you could change in the future to improve more imo is a more complex rhyme scheme.

All on point.
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