i don't know.... it just didn't grab me.... didn't sound hard enough.... honestly, i didn't even listen to the whole thing.... ya need to come out stronger in the beginning... grab the listeners attention... make them feel like "yo, this dude bout to let kid have it!!!".... i didn't feel that.... put more energy and conviction into a battle track... this one sounded like you weren't sure if ya could beat him or not...just my opinion though....

to break it down for ya... i'd say ya need to be momre hungry on da mic.... like.... starving and near death and this is gonna be the last thing that the comp is gonna hear from ya.... you want them to remember this shyt for the rest of they natural born days... ya wanna make it so that a nuk nuk can't even respond.....werd....

stay up, though.... i know you've done better than this

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