Voted For: MC:Philosopher

good battle right here...

wordplay was dope from both y'all...

I'mma break it down...



U ANOREXIATE……. THROWIN UP rhymes….. ur win margins very SLIM
U never follow the ELEMENTS so ima go ahead and BARIUM (bury him)
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Thats nice

U neva CUMIN out HARD u soft nigga……… ERECTLESS
Leavin u to DINE-ON-SORES(dinosaur) w/o TEA that’s why REX-LESS
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Thats alright, I liked the worldplay, set up line could of been better tho..

Dawg u NEVER CONNECT so why PUNCH u know u BLIND and all
But I throw DOME shots so go aHEAD-ACHE like TYLONOL
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Nice closer too.

Thats my quotables outta your erse, overall it was aight, wordplay was good throughout, just work on trynna land your puns a little better, yo.



Born a ledgend..if my rhymes hard to catch, go fetch them...
cuz your ass dont deserve the right to be a rectum..
Doooope opener

then the verse went a little downhill...

Not as consistant as MC:Phil....but it was still aight

Phil took this tho

good battle tho y'all.

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