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Flyweight
From: Chicago-U Already Know |
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Voted For: Carmelo
Damn, BoTh Had Hot ass Shyt.....but I liked the way Carmelo Ended his Shyt better.....
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.Overall FaCtz..
PRE:
dude you had some mad hot lines, only thing u fucked up was ya shyt got borin at the end.. the swollen balls thing.....*thump* if u would have left that out, u woulda got my vote DAWG...
ya best lines to me was...
"five thousand posts, no life and still you learning the basics
this fake kid neva get the picture, so I grab a pen and trace it"
lol.......nice personal...datz fucked up though 5000 still in front lines..haha..
overall...ya verse was banging, ya last lines just fucked it up...and i dun like the way ur verse looks either...its too plain...lol....put some dots...ore some slashes...nice shyt though..
Carmelo:
Ya Shyt, Flowed well even though u didnt have multis and i think there was a personal i dunno but newayz , i hate the ............ thingy, but i guess, it makes the Point....Ya best lines to me was:
"prems the type to cause hype and immitate Vets Style.
Next he'll be ''knittin yarn'' for a better Text-style (textile"
that was creative, and str8 liked that much...
"Atleast nobody gon fuck wit ya, hold your head up high
Cause if I was you & I started rhymin
.........................................even i'd be askin...WHY"
lol....that was funni.....cuz u left dude grimey with that, i loved the outro...
Overall ya Verse was onpoint, i just hate them damn DOTZ....u got em..
sO VOTE:cARMELO..
But i was more into
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