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Old 03-08-06, 10:06 AM   #9
Tha Q.
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beat: creative...I like it
flow: not bad dawg...just enunciate more
lyrics: tough to tell...sound coo...hook is mumbled
overall: I'd suggest redoin this...I couldn't understand your lyrics


Work on your articulation some...It'll make it easier to understand your lyrics...some of your words run together
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