2nd chance...eh lets see how this goes.....

another mixtapeish song.....

laser eye surgery line sounds forced....work on breathin a bit and you could hit it....just sounds like a lil mistake

the hook is pretty good....maybe needs a lil more to it....but i mean its still kinda hot....

different kinda flow to the beat....thats good, keeps it from being boring.....nice multi's but it seems like less meta's, the singing at the end is pretty good....not quite on key, but hey thats why we rap right? haha, you dont need to hear any shit about production you seem to have that down....just listen over and work on ya breathign a lil more on certian parts...not the most intresting of tracks, not the most lyrically gifted of tracks...but none the less a good track....keep it up, and step ya game up a lil bit...your getting there (where as im nowhere close, ha.)

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