first guy....sounds like you arent feling the beat....just sound seperated from it....i dunno, just how i feel....lyrics are real simple
j-kwon? on the hook....jp but you do sound like a younger j-kwon....catchy hook....the verese by you sounds the same flex ya voice a lil....not a bad track at all.....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead