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Old 03-08-06, 07:06 PM   #22
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Voted For: TaShay

This is was a horrible battle, buddy, you have no understanding of battling...you had horrible structure, very few, and weak metaphors...no personals what so ever, the punchlines were god awful....that was a disgrace of a verse...

TaShay, yours wasn't much better, but you alteast did show some understanding of battling....the first bar....showed some significance in the metaphor/punchline area....the 2nd bar was a little better, the third bar was better than the first two, and the closer was horrible....don't get me wrong, none of this was good....but you def outshined buddy....
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