u need 2 separate ya lines & put it in a stanza & if ur not sure wut i'm talkin bout
like diz here:
watch out here comes a fuccin goon
ur more animated den characters on cartoons
but othawise u also need 2 add multies a few punchlines so it'll liven ya text up more deuce
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