A Reflection Of The Past
From: inside your nightmare's |
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well im nt a hater anyways what i liked about this piece was the voacabulary and imagery it was vivid, the structure has got to go wasnt feeling it, the emotion however was decent could of been more emotional....anyways not a totally bad read her man some decent writing displayed stay up.
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Crhyme Sindicate
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