thanks for the feed my man, to explain the structure, it's spoken word, and i can definately understand why people would hate reading it, it sound 10 times better on my audio than it reads in text...and same with audio, the emotion is in my tone and volume, this was a pretty political piece...i didn't want to bury it's meaning in a bunch of detailed drawn out emotion, because i wanted people to focus on the essense of it..but your oppinion is respected..and i def understand it...thanks again

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