Dam !!! This is the best verse I have read this year fams !!!

The opener was nice,... liked the flow nice inners !!

The Middle was great, kept the same flow and rhyming, really deep emotions
Vision,..

Fav barz,...
over indulgent with insults, gluttonous verbs strike..
and Lust can look like love if you wrap your words right..
Use my ability to boast of your petty accomplishments..
you still envy, compared to him, you really havn't accomplished shit..


And then the close,.. flowed well didn't lose anything,.. had dope vocab
emotions was deep and I like this bar,..

Hieroglyphics would better serve you, finding the worst ways to word it..
Wars and death become of me, the son of man's the son of me..
An hours absurd, to explain the beauty in a flowers facade..
The power of words, is also known to me as, the Power of God..

Deep !!! really like this verse fams stay up and keep writing.

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