Voted For: SlicKnife

picture perfect....

nice wordplay in the first 2 lines... but unfortunately that's all ya had going for you.... almost every other word was "shit"... got adjectives?...nouns?... synonyms?....damn.... i mean.... the pampers line was straight amateur...punches didn't connect at all.... set-ups were suspect... shoulda kept it on the same level of wordplay as the first two lines

Slick....

punches were definitely setup better... not the best punches but still set up better overall...

Not worth it see...you enjoy posting verses SO shoddy...
...But nobody is perfect.............its also true that Perfect is nobody!

set up was cool^^^ but that second line is stretched all to hell... i tried to recite in time and found i couldn't do it without stretching the line.... it's not about just making it rhyme... shyt's still gotta fit to some kinda rhythm

I guess not...one bar could kill you, so I wrote this whilst busy but...
...next time they say Pictures worth a thousands words, say Nah...IS HE FUCK!

you fucked up ya closer badly.... the setup was perfect and the idea in the last line was there... then i saw this:

IS HE FUCK!..... huh?...it don't even make sense!!! you edged him out by very little and that's only cuz ya lines were set up better... keep at it though... it's all love....

btw... i don't even do text no more... i'm audio only... just helping the text kats out by getting them votes in there

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