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Voted For: one mic

Vote for: JD

I'm gonna go the other way and do positives and negatives

Positives

Sik Wit it: Good bars

-I don’t do this for fun, just call me the Show Stopper
I’ll get more kicks outta u, without shoppin champs or footlocker
-Fuck off I’ll destroy this homeless tramp
One mic ducks so much, he needs his own exit ramp
-Look kid I told you before, ur not good at all
That’s unpredictable like Prince playin basketball(this one's on the bar cause it could've been done way better)
-Get clowned, so go ahead and bitch n’ whine
You can’t even spit & stay on beat at the same time(Personal could've been done better)

JD

-You’ve chosen to battle me, but soon you’ll be dead
‘cause you couldn’t be rockin in a chair with one leg
- keep it locked, comin’ with lethal drops
You’re so wack, when you rap, the DJ’s needle stops
-Believe im hot, im bringin more than you can bare
This is too easy, I may aswell be battling air

NOTHING PARTICULAR I LIKED ABOUT STYLES AND THINGS
The negatives subtract bars for the total so here we go
Negatves

Sik Wit It

-Opening he repeated wack so creativity is lacking
-Alot of the disses were too simple but could've been better such as:
That’s right fool, I’m the masta but u already know
And I’ll make ya face crooked than Scottie Pippen’s nose
HE HAD A COUPLE OF THOSE

JD
-Simpleness plauged this verse too
-such as: Why am I battlin you?
Get away from me I hate queers
This guys punchlines are more played out than Shakespeare
He had a couple too

I didn't count delivery and flo because both had equal problems, one mic couldn't balance his bars so he had huge spaces that messed it up. Sikwitit had parts of his verse that were rushed. Too many words messed your verse up.

so for this one i'm a have to go with....JD

You had more good bars sik wit it but your verse was longer and had more bad bars to counter balance this.

v/JD

Good Battle