love the beats....the roots are niceeeeeeee.....
uhh i cant say too much positive...i just keep singing duck down....and well ya your not gon be that good but okay let me be serious.....

well first off...your production is real good...i might need to get some tips from you on that....BIG UPs for that.....
the flow...eh, your going half speed on the beat...sounds a lil off....i duuno, lyrics...simple...not bad but simple


hook....ehh. not that good....

2nd verse....eh i liked the first better....the voice doesnt sound as clear cuz the dude has too much saliva....needs to control that a lil more....lyrics same or worse then the first.....

but damn....good production.....didnt like the song much..but it sounded real crisp and clear....so i mean you got the chance....

word....i see im the only one givin feedback....return the favor man
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223865

holla at me

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